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- Rubric filled in? Yes
- Clear description of each key topic listed in the outline? Reasonably clear and fairly complete
- Appropriate depth of detail? Appropriate detail
- Appropriate breadth? Appropriate breadth
- Between 2000 and 4000 words (i.e., 3 to 6 pages)? Reasonable length
- Overall, a very good first draft. There are places where your writing is less clear than it should be. Working with the instructors on this during office hours could greatly improve the article. The picture you use must have a Creative Commons license, because Wikipedia does not publish copyrighted pictures or figures. Thus, you need to find whether this picture is copyrighted or has a Creative Commons license, or replace the figure with one that does have a Creative Commons license, or create your own figure.
Hillel Chiel (talk) 22:18, 22 November 2016 (EST)