File talk:Asb164 TermPaper MultipleSclerosis Diagram.jpeg

• Rubric filled out? No
• First sentence brief and definitional? Absent
• Concise summary and overview of entire article? Absent
• Table of contents? Present, but overlaps existing article
• Illustration: Accurate and informative. Wikipedia does not publish copyrighted illustrations. Thus, either you must show that this illustration has a Creative Commons license, or replace it with an illustration that does have such a license, or create your own illustration.
• Between 100 and 300 words? Essentially missing.
• Overall, this is an inadequate first benchmark. First, the topic almost completely overlaps an existing Wikipedia article, and thus is not appropriate for this class assignment. Second, you have written almost nothing. Third, the illustration may not be suitable.

Hillel Chiel (talk) 20:38, 1 November 2016 (EDT)